Eloquence
Cornelius Eady's The Wrong Street is formatted oddly: line breaks are placed seemingly haphazardly, cutting statements in half more often than not. In class, we briefly discussed why Eady chose to do this. Someone (I forgot who lol) suggested that Eady intentionally tried to make his poem look unorthodox, messy, and unprofessional, to convey a tone of desperation, as if he wanted to get the message out as quickly as possible and didn't have time to format it properly. Or maybe he's writing out the poem while words come naturally to him, not bothering to go back and format them. Looking more closely, each individual line break actually provides a minuscule sense of mysteriousness to the poem. For example: If you could shuck your skin and watch (Watch what?) The action from a safe vantage point, (What vantage point?) You might find a weird beauty in this, ...